Number of posts : 1 Registration date : 2011-09-05
Subject: A lone wolfs story 05/09/11, 01:11 pm
Red walked down the rocky path. Her feet were acking and she hadn't eaten in days. Her black fur was covered in sweat. She finnally spotted some type of food. She chased after it and caught. She was so proud as she ate her mouse. Wait she thought wolves don't eat mice they eat....... She had forgotten. She had been without food for 2 months and forgotten how to take care of herself and what she should eat. She fell asleep hopping oneday she would remeber what it was like being a real wolf.
snowstripe
Number of posts : 4 Registration date : 2011-01-25
Subject: Re: A lone wolfs story 08/09/11, 08:33 am
Nice story
Centurus
Number of posts : 6 Registration date : 2012-04-09
Subject: good 03/05/12, 07:05 am
nice job but it kinda needs a little more details im not trying to be mean kk i think it was great
moxywolf123
Number of posts : 6 Registration date : 2012-05-12
Subject: moxy 12/05/12, 11:47 am
cool i aggree i thing it needs editing
Danny Phantom Fan Beta-Tester
Number of posts : 146 Registration date : 2010-07-06
Subject: Re: A lone wolfs story 12/05/12, 05:17 pm
Not trying to be mean but....After around a week, week and a half, you'd die of starvation. You can't last two months without food. And, after three days you loose the desire to eat.
But, despite that it's really good!
wolfvamplove
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Subject: Re: A lone wolfs story 13/05/12, 07:46 pm
Centurus wrote:
nice job but it kinda needs a little more details im not trying to be mean kk i think it was great
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